Need some help real quick some ideas to help me write it or give me a few sentences to get started kinda confused on what they asking of me.will give brainly for people who help.

In a good paragraph, where you show in your own writing what you know about sentence fluency, tell which sample you ranked the highest and explain what qualities you saw in it.

Sample 1:


My Passion


I am passionate about my dancing. I have studied ballet since I was six years old, and I continue to love this pursuit. Although it is grueling work to prepare the body and the mind for a performance, I experience a delicious euphoria when I am on stage. When exhausted after a day's rigorous practice, I often wonder whether the end result is worth the physical discipline, self-denial and mental focus. Then, I imagine myself on stage again, at the height of fitness and alertness, ready for that opening curtain. This is when I know that, yes, it is all worth it!

Sample 2:


My Passion


I love to dance. I love the stage and the lights. I love the audience and the excitement of the performance. I don't always love the preparation it takes to get me onto that stage. The physical work is grueling. The mental discipline is hard. I can't always eat everything other teens eat. I sometimes wonder if it's all worth it. When I'm ready to perform, though, I guess it is.

sample 3,
My Passion


Dance is my life. It is my heart and soul. I am passionate about dance. On stage, I feel groundless, as if I have no limits, no earthly weight. The spirit of freedom which sinks into my every cell sets my body free. When I dance, everything is possible! When I dance, there is magic and light! When I dance, the euphoria of the moment erases the memory of all the painful physical conditioning and self-denial. To dance, for me, is to live!

Respuesta :

The question is asking which paragraph is the best. Good paragraphs should have a variety of different sentence structures and starters and should include statements or facts with explanations. Sample 2 has choppy sentences and doesn't have explainations. Sample 3 describes feelings toward dance but again doesn't have any concrete explainations why.

I would rate sample 1 as the best.